Max and Cherry at the Park
by Ozzie
A boy named Max took his dog, Cherry, to the Atlanta park. There were blue skies and green grass.
Max and Cherry played fetch with a frisbee. Cherry was very good at fetch. A lot of dogs were at the park that day. They had a lot of fun while they were playing fetch.
The frisbee went behind a building, and the dog got lost. Max yelled for Cherry. Then he found Cherry, and they went home.
On the way home they saw a dog walker, airplane, apartments, and their house. When they were in their house, Max ate a rice krispy. Cherry took a long nap. At bedtime, Max closed his eyes and fell asleep.
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Grandma Garrison
Posted on Oct. 23, 2020, 11:31 p.m.
I just read your story and I thought it was fun to read. It was very good in describing what Max and Cherry did to have a fun day. You could know that Max and Cherry like to do things together. I really liked the part where Max found Cherry. The picture of Cherry was very good.
Glenda Garrison
Posted on Oct. 23, 2020, 11:46 p.m.
I read your story and thought it was very good. I liked the way that Max and Cherry had so much fun doing things together. I liked that Max found Cherry after he got lost. You good see that Max and Cherry really liked being together. I liked that you described what they saw on way home. They had a fun day.