Cleetus Goes to the Military by Sy
Cleetus had just finished high school. He was really happy. There was going to be a celebration for Cleetus. His mom and dad were setting up a surprise party. Cleetus came into his house and everyone shouted surprise. Cleetus loved the mint chocolate cake. Cleetus was really sleepy, so he went to bed. He woke up in a good mood.
Cleetus packed his bags and said bye. Cleetus was so excited to go to college. He was so happy when he got there. He gets in the classes for the military. He goes to his job after two lessons. Cleetus worked at a Mexican restaurant. After two years, Cleetus finally graduated college.
Cleetus was really happy driving to the military base. The military welcomed him in the army. Cleetus was doing well at training. He practiced shooting a gun. The commanders were impressed. They made Cleetus one rank higher. Cleetus was so happy when he graduated from training, and then moved on to the next adventure.
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Glenda Garrison
Posted on Nov. 14, 2020, 5:40 p.m.
I really enjoyed the story. It was very well written. You moved Cleetus through the years quickly but with good explanation. It was very descriptive. He is a very adventurous person and seems to know exactly what he wanted to do.
Grandma G
Glenda Garrison
Posted on Nov. 14, 2020, 6:15 p.m.
I really enjoyed the story. It was very well written. You moved Cleetus through the years quickly but with good explanation. It was very descriptive. He a very adventurous person and seems to know exactly what he wants to do.
Grandma G
Grandma Zontek
Posted on Nov. 17, 2020, 5:28 p.m.
What a great story. Cleetus finished college in 2 years. He must be smart like you ! Great job. 👍