Cleetus and the Ocean
by Sy
Cleetus was going fishing with his mom and dad. They were going to a dock at the ocean. The ocean was very blue and deep. Cleetus caught a big fish. Cleetus also saw a shark.
Cleetus used a fake fish with a hook on it to catch that big fish. It took
Cleetus about five minutes to catch the big fish. Cleetus pulled out a fishing guide and saw that it was probably a catfish, because the fish had whiskers, a big mouth, and a scaly texture.
Cleetus saw another shark when he was leaving. Cleetus knew it was a shark because he saw a fin was sticking out the water. Cleetus got really scared after seeing the shark fin sticking out of the water. Cleetus told his parents that he saw a shark fin and that he was scared. The shark affected Cleetus by making him scared.
Cleetus talked about how fun it was to go fishing on the way home. When Cleetus was home they grilled the fish. Cleetus talked about if they could go to the park tomorrow at dinner. Cleetus was really tired after the big day he just had. Cleetus fell right asleep on his bed.
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Glenda Garrison
Posted on Oct. 23, 2020, 10:16 p.m.
I just read your story about Cleetus. I thought it was very interesting. I especially liked the way you described how he figured out it was a catfish, and you picked a good way to end it. 👍🏻
Glenda Garrison
Posted on Oct. 23, 2020, 11:39 p.m.
I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the way Cleetus had such a good time spending the day with his mom and dad. I especially liked the way you described the catfish and how he figured out what kind of fish he had caught. I liked how they had so much fun and that they grilled the fish when they got home.